Date: 12/29/2017 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
In my enthusiasm, I forgot to mention that I loved the last chapter best because I love the heartwarming Christmas memories. I could totally see Tim listening to those three records every year. I love piecing together bits of their back stories and I thought that was superb and is my new head canon. Thank you again. :)
Figuring out how to end this story was the hardest part for me. I based a lot of it on my own experience with knee surgery, although Tim had it much better than I since he didn't have to wait four months between injury and surgery. :) I'm glad you liked the epilogue because I fiddled with it quite a bit.
Date: 12/29/2017 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
Love it! Love it! Love it! Awesome Christmas surprise! First that iheartGibbs chose you to write for me. Second, I knew the story was going to be GOOD and you did NOT disappoint! I am thrilled. I love how you write Tony and Tim friendship and it felt good.
Just so you know, it looks like the bottom of chapter 5 got cut off. It stops mid-word at the bottom so I'm thinking there might be a little missing?
Otherwise, great story. Thank you for writing for me. :)
Drat! Not only was there a huge chunk missing from chapter 5 (and the most important part of the chapter, too!), but there were smaller chunks missing from chapters 3 and 4 as well. Plus, my formatting got messed up. I hate the story board. :P
So, beyond asking that you reread chapter 5 at least so that you can get the important conversation in there, I'm really glad you liked it!