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Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2018 08:31 pm Title: A Celebration

If this could really happen in the show (I can wish!) it would be the most romantic and touching moment ever! Right when I think it can't get any better you surpass yourself. I loved the dances and the songs. The songs matched the moment perfectly. Loved the bit of humor at the end regarding Ziva's driving. Can't wait for the honeymoon and our two guys finding out about the twins. Love this series so much! Thank you, thank you for this beautiful chapter.

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!

Never fear, the honeymoon is under construction as we speak.


The twins - should that avenue actually pan out - willl be in yet another piece of their oddessey.

Thank you again, so very much, for staying with us on thier journey! 

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2018 03:50 pm Title: We're Gathered Together...

I just saw this chapter. When you deliver, you deliver! The wedding was so romantic! The song, vows...I'm not much of a crier but I had tears. I was so touched. McGibbs was perfect! Love the name. The way you write about Tim and Leroy is so totally convincing. They are perfect together, true soul mates. I know I keep saying it. Anyways, thank you again.

Author's Response:

So happy you enjoyed it!!

Next up  - the Reception - gotta dance, sing, toast and have cake before they can depart, right?

Thank you so much for stickin' with us on this!

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2018 11:55 am Title: No Bachelor Party Here!

Wow! Just saw this chapter.
Hopefully Tony finally gets it that Tim and Leroy are just fine. Tony's reactions at the end were priceless. Too funny though hopefully the rings will be found. Thank goodness for Ducky. Always the voice of reason. Can't wait for the wedding. The anticipaton is nerve wracking!

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying this  - hopefully,I can get the wedding chapter done this weekend - working on it, I promise.

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2018 02:02 pm Title: Change... and The Domino Effect

The wait was worthwhile and the little bit of Tiva was like the cherry on top of an ice cream sundae. Your "McGibbs" stories are romantic, sexy, dashes of humor and you don't bash characters to death like bugs. I've read other slash pairings but Tim and Leroy are what work the best in my opinion. I'm a total Tim/Gibbs fan. You write them perfectly. Your story lines should be episodes on the show. Loved the talk between Tony and Gibbs, so them. The talk between Tony and Ziva was just perfect. The song Tim sent to Leroy was so romantic, my heart melted. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

sorry i posted this chapter 2x - didn't notice that until toda - when i also remembered I hadn't uploaded the 2nd finished chapter.

glad you enjoyed this - and so VERY thankful for your patience and understanding!

It's awesome having you along for the ride - so thank you for that.

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2017 08:41 pm Title: Pre-Wedding Chaos and Stolen Moments

I love Sarah's gift. Won't the guys be floored when they find out it's twins! Tony's reactions were so Tony, spot on. Penny and Ducky are perfect. It was kind of funny having Gibbs telling Tim no release for the 2 days they weren't going to be together. Over all very romantically hot and anxiously waiting for the wedding. You have all the characters down to a T. The very end of the chapter didn't seem to load all the way though or was it supposed to be a period? Loved this chapter!

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the chapter  -  Thank you for letting me know it didn't load right.

I've put the cut off part - not too short --- into a chapter by itself.

hope you enjoy!!

up next - the non-party-bachelor parties.

thank you again!

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2017 06:29 pm Title: Of Family, Friends & Plans For Tomorrow

This chapter was very sweet and moving. I was very touched by all the character's thoughts and actions. Absolutely wonderful!

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it.

just one more to go before the wedding - hope to have it up this week.

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2017 01:48 pm Title: To Have and To Hold

Just got over a bad virus and then I saw 2 new chapters of my favorite story. This was better than any medicine! You got it all perfectly. Both chapters full of hope and love for our 2 guys. This chapter was super hot! I thought I was running a fever again.

Author's Response:

So sorry to hear you've ben sick. Happy to hear you're better.  Glad to have you back.

Very happy that you enjoyed the chapters you came back to.

More as soon as I get the chance to go back through the relevant episodes for fun facts and actual remarks made.
hopefully in the next day or two

Thank you again!

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2017 06:17 pm Title: With A Little Help From A Friend

Wow! Never in a million years would I have guessed Abby would have come to the "rescue"! Nice and I love it! Will she ever be forgiven? Though after what she did it would be difficult. I was thinking Vance, Jimmy, Dorneget or even Fornell...does he even know? I guess I'll have to re-read everything from the beginning and find out. A very enjoyable thing to do.

Author's Response:

Heh, Given how she got her hands on what she gave them- not likely to be allowed back in just yet. Forgiven? Probably already done - considering staying angry at her would just take up too much of thier time/energy.

Jimmy, yes.  Dornie, yes - even if off stage. they will at least know.  Fornell? knows off screen - even if Gibbs hasn't thought back to that conversation yet. Good questions.

Thank you so much for reading/reviewing.  And reminding me of what I'd missed.

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2017 05:01 pm Title: Letting It Out

Yep, it's me again! Huge relief with this chapter. Penny was definitely the hero. You sure do know how to keep a person on their toes with suspense. It's tortuous...I like it!

Author's Response:

She certainly made a huge diiference, didn't she?

wait til you see the next person who helps out!

Fasten your seatbelt for the next chapter!

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2017 04:25 pm Title: And the Bad

Well fudgemonkeys! Somebody needs to shake a stick at these 2 guys. Loved this even though it was angsty. This is my favorite series. I very much enjoy reading and re-reading all of your stories with Gibbs and Tim.

Author's Response:

so glad you're still enjoying this!

good news - the writing block seems to have been resolved and the story is 95% done!

with that being said - here's the next chapter!|

and thank you again, so much!!

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2017 08:03 pm Title: Through the Good Times...

I was at work when I saw this update. I almost squealed, I was so excited! Couldn't wait to get home to appreciate and savor every word. You're so great at writing about my 2 favorite guys that you just need to live forever and continue writing about them. No pressure mind you. No worries about the delay. It makes me appreciate each chapter that much more. Hope all is well. Thank you again!

Author's Response:

aw, thank you!!!!

Unfortunatey, I forgot my edits/additions  for the next 2 chapters at work on this long holiday weekend - so there's an unexpected delay there.  But, hopefully I'll be able to play catchup- on the remaining unfinished ending instead


Thank you again!!  Bless You!

So thankful and happy that you're still hanging in there with me!,

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2017 11:18 am Title: Love Equals Concessions and Compromise

Welcome back. I'm so very happy to read the updates on this. Wonderful as always. I'm literally on edge waiting to see what happens next to this wonderful couple. Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for staying with me through this!!!
Your patience is so very much appreciated!

hopefully, another chapter before this time next week.
Thank you again!

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2017 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

I hope you haven't forgotten this story. I love these two guys together. There's not enough Gibbs/McGee stories. I hope all is well with you.

Author's Response:

I am so very sorry it's been so long.

I haven't forgotten it - but life has seriously gotten in the way.

new chapter posted yesterday.

thank you so much for your support

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2017 07:56 am Title: A Little Christmas is Better than None

I can't wait for Gibbs and Tim to talk. I can't wait for Tony and Tim to talk too. While they gripe and snark at each other they're like brothers. I liked the interaction between Tony and Ziva. You do realize you can't finish this series. It would be a crime against humanity. :)

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Date: 01/10/2017 07:07 am Title: Chapter 8

I had a lump in my throat after reading this. Tim is my favorite character and I just want him to be happy. I do feel bad for Tony even though he's still frustrating. Ziva needs to spank him then hug him. Thank goodness for Ducky's wisdom. As for Gibbs I feel for him too. After all he's been should be a writer for the show. You make this seem like it can actually happen on the show. It's that believable. Now to wait and see who Tim is going to contact. The suspense! Thank you again.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

so very happy to see that you're still reading this!
hoping to have the next chapter up soon.


Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2016 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow...this can go either way. Is Tim going to rip into Tony big time? Is Tim going to have an emotional outburst over the whole situation? He certainly is due to do both. Tony is frustrating me. He needs to open his eyes and talk with Tim.I hope Ducky and Ziva are there for support.I hope Tim and Gibbs still get married. They so much deserve their happily forever after ending. I hope Abby finds her way back to them one day.Thank you.

Author's Response:

So very sorry i've been so long in remembering to respond.  Tim's not focused on Tony enough to actually deal with him at the moment - and when he will is still up in the air.

I've got  a strong feeling that nothing will derail the eventaul wedding. - it just might be one heck of a roller coaster ride to get there.


Thanks again for reading/reviewing.

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2016 10:32 am Title: Due Dilligence

I've been checking daily for this update. I got so excited. I then saw the chapter notes. You put your self first. Hope all is well now. Sending sunshine your way. Great job as always.
Thank you and many blessings!

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2016 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow....I get where Tim is coming from. That deep soul searing pain. Hopefully Gibbs subconsciously and consciously realizes Tim is with him body, heart and soul. What happened with the vest? You have me curious about that. And the wedding...oh no! Hopefully Tim won't be consumed by revenge even though it would be hard not to be. As always thank you. Incredible as always.

Author's Response:

again, my apologies.

Tim's nowhere close to thinking about revenge - thank goodness.

let's hope things turn around for him,  for both of them...hmm?

thank you again for your support

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2016 07:59 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh no....! Why would Gibbs go without a vest after giving Tim his word? I can see why Tim is so angry with Tony and upset with Gibbs. There has to be a reason why Gibbs would do this though. He wouldn't disregard Tim this way! Please don't split up our guys. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

wow - I am SO sorry!

I never realized until today that I have never responded to your wonderful review.

Thank you so much for your continued reading/reviewing!

I'm so glad you like this and are staying with me for the ride.

Reviewer: jdgatorbait Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2016 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love it, so glad you are continuing this series and I am looking forward to a beautiful wedding and our baby Gibbs-McGee. Of course there will have to be a little fun when Uncle Tony babysits, (hopefully when child is a precocious and very active toddler). As always love your work. Thank you for hours of entertainment.

Author's Response:

so glad you liked it - and SO happy to see you again!!

truthfully, the babies won't be along just yet - after all, our couple has just been thrown a huge hurdle in thier path to thier future together.  The question remains - when will they get married now?  Will they make it through this unscathed enough to get married now?

Thanks again for reading/reviewing!  Next chapter's up!

Reviewer: marissa3362 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2016 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

I saw your name and Odyssey series and the bag of Skittles I was about to devour just about flew skywards! Then I read the summary. NO! Then I read your story. Loved it of course but NO! Leroy has to survive this and marry Tim and start a family. Leroy's and Tim's interactions are so realistic. Fantastic as always. Many thanks from one of your many fans. Now I'm off to the store for more Skittles in preparation for rest of this story.

Author's Response:

aw, thank you!!!

So very happy that  you like this so far and are looking forward to where this might go.

it will be bumpy - LOL!

next chapter is up.

Thank you again for your reading/reviewing/ support!

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