Date: 04/19/2012 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
I've always wanted to write the convenience store robbery, but I'm glad I didn't because you handle it much better. I would've had them holed up like it was Dog Day Afternoon. I saw you slip in a little McGiva there. You are not known for your romances, but I liked it. I liked the ending too. It's fitting to have a stranger come in and set McGee back on the right path. Excellent work, Lia.
I like scenarios where everyday and routine tasks suddenly go sideways. I think it happens more often than not. No, I'm not a romance person, but Sazzy likes it and it was her prize, so... ;)
Sometimes we do need an outside perspective, and I figured that McGee might listen to someone who was connected to the other victim rather than to him.
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked this one :)
Date: 04/15/2012 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
I always feel like I'm cheating when I jump over here to read a new chapter that's here and not "there"! Excellent chapter, I did not expect bad guy to be dead so soon. So nowwww, I'm thinking there will be a twist here soon.
I had to get it posted here, but it will be up in other places soon. I'm glad you're enjoying it ;)