Date: 08/20/2011 08:24 am Title: Chapter 1
That was beautiful. I could so se all those things going through her mind in such a short moment of time.
Author's Response: Thanks Sue!! I am thrilled that you enjoyed the story and that it seemed believable. I have always liked to think that Michelle was an analyzer and I wanted to show that, and I also wanted to show that she wasn't an all out bad guy! Thanks for the kind words and stopping by to ready my story :)
Date: 08/19/2011 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really touching. It was a hard scene to watch. I think this is really creative. Sheila
Author's Response: Aww thanks Shelia!!! That is such a flattering comment coming from you :). I thought it was a hard scene to watch as well and I am glad you thought this was different & creative. Thanks so much for your comment it means a lot :)