Reviews For Mask of Innocence
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Reviewer: AgentProbieGeek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2011 03:52 am Title: Chapter 8

Super,freaking good.

Author's Response: WOW, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :-) ~~Sue

Reviewer: lsmcfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2011 09:49 am Title: Chapter 8

Dark storry, but I really like how you told it
do we get something light & fluffy next?
thanks :)
Lynne

Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate your review. I look forward to writing something lighter and happier! ~~Sue

Reviewer: lsmcfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2011 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for getting back to this! I'm enjoying this story, even though we all know that Tim would never murder anyone...or would he???

Author's Response: I'm glad it's finally coming together for me. It's a dark place I don't normally venture into, so it's been a tough road. Thanks for reviewing and hold on for the ending. ~~Sue

Reviewer: fuxia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2011 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 6

I love this story, as I said ...
this situation, where the good are not so good, always gets me ...

Author's Response: I'm glad you still are enjoying it. Thanks for the patience as it took me so long to finally get the story going where I wanted it to go! ~~Sue

Reviewer: Valkyrie-chick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 05:49 am Title: Chapter 4

Love this chapter! You keep on delivering! I cannot wait till chapter 5!

Author's Response: Thanks Meghan. I do appreciate your reviews and support! I'm trying to get chapter 5 just right, or as right as possible. ~~Sue PS Don't short-change your writing ability!!!

Reviewer: fuxia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2011 07:01 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this history....

Author's Response: Thanks Evelyn! I'm glad you're enjoying it. It's certainly a different type of story for me, lol! ~~Sue

Reviewer: Cat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2011 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

I wonder if NCIS knows.

Author's Response: Well there was at least one NCIS agent who discovered his secret. It didn't end well... Will the others figure it out? They are the top MCRT! Thanks! ~~Sue

Reviewer: Cat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2011 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 2

I wonder who he killed.

Author's Response: Yes, it is a little bit of a mystery isn't it?..... Thanks again! ~~Sue

Reviewer: Cat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2011 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

His FATHER

Author's Response: Yeah, tragic. It had to start somewhere close to home huh? Blame Lia! lol. Thanks for reviewing/rating! ~~Sue

Reviewer: akaeve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2011 05:33 am Title: Chapter 3

very good Sue , a little dark for you but very well written

Author's Response: Well, yeah. I blame Lia. It's fun to see my dark side. I wonder if I could get away with it.... j/k! Thanks! ~~Sue

Reviewer: anabo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2011 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter,I am starting to see McGee as a killer,it always strikes me when a serial killer is found and the people around him never suspected it.

Author's Response: Do they really not sspect or do they turn a blind eye? I think some are better at hiding it than others. Thanks for reviewing!! ~~Sue

Reviewer: Junee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2011 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

I like this story....it shows a whole other side of Tim and how he could have easily turned out.Please update as often as you can.Is it Tony that he killed at the begining?

Author's Response: Guess we'll have to wait to be sure who he killed. Thanks for the review. I'm hoping updates won't be too long in coming, but I do have a few stories in the works. ~~Sue

Reviewer: tigyr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2011 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

What??? Timmy a psycho???? Nooo...say it isn't sooooo...ahhhhh...

 

Great start so far Sue ^_^ 



Author's Response: Thanks. It's a story that's taken me longer to write, but it's hard to get into that mindset with Timmy. Darn that Lia, lol! <> ~~Sue

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