Date: 08/13/2010 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 8
loved it:)
Author's Response: thank you ^_^
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2010 10:18 am Title: Chapter 4
wow.
so glad Gibbs finally had his eyes opened to his own blinders where Abby's concerned (I'm always a sucker for that )
I hope to see them work things out together - someone's gonna get hurt any other way - and none of them deserve to be hurt or want to do the hurting.
Author's Response: Yup, we can't have too much hurting going on...
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2010 09:37 am Title: Chapter 3
it's great to see Tim's perspective on what he knows.
uh-oh - do they know he's been accessing their journals?
T.R.O.U.B.L.E ??
Author's Response:
Not yet they don't
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2010 09:27 am Title: Chapter 8
OK I have to admit I skipped the two chapters previously (but I promice to read, OK at least the Tim/Tony one (I can't believe I actually wrote that LOL). This chapter was brilliant and I was smiling almost at the duration of my reading. It had a nice heart-warming element with both of them helping the other. You did a wonderful job, Lori and I am really touched by the dedication. Loved it!
Author's Response: Awww...shucks ^_^
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2010 08:31 am Title: Chapter 2
there was nothing not to love in this chapter
the dreams were a nice touch - and a great way into the inner mind of our resident mute (as some people call him)
and Tim's littile (MOAS) - very slick.
I'm glad he's known all along - probably made everything they put him through more tolorable -if not more confusing.
ah, the complexities of human relationships, hmm?
Author's Response: Yup...that's our Timmy complex and confusing ^_^
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2010 07:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok, here you go
**holds out hand in preparation for the ruler smack**
I haven't made the time to read this until now and I'm sorry I missed out on it as it was being put out.
I like that it's a little unclear which entry belongs to whom
It's great that they both can appreciate things about Tim that he doesn't realize they even notice.
Author's Response: Ruler smack? That would be harsh of me to even contemplate Donna...^_^...and yeah I realze that the first two chapters are a bit complex...hopefully the others make up for the first two ^_^
Date: 08/13/2010 03:22 am Title: Chapter 8
Very nice and the last chapter is the way I wanted it to end.
Author's Response: Oops I thought I commented earlier, but thank you Carolyn...that's high praise from one such as yourself. Thank you ^_^
[Report This]Date: 08/12/2010 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Bittersweet. Tim letting Gibbs down as gently as possible. Gibbs being the 'good sport' and leaving gracefully, but both Tim and Tony watching out for him. AW.
~~Sue
Author's Response: They still love him even if they can't get through to him.^_^
Date: 08/09/2010 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Look forward to it (what if Gibbs landed on Tony- uh oh).
~~Sue
Author's Response:
Guess that could get the threesome started huh?...lol
Date: 08/09/2010 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
ROFL, that would be a fun scene huh?
Author's Response:
Yeah I might actually be able to work that into one of the chapters...lol
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2010 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
Decisions, decisions... let's play a game! ;-)
~~Sue
Author's Response: Spin the bottle??? LOL Thanks Sue ^_^
Date: 08/09/2010 11:40 am Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait 4 the next chapter:)
Author's Response: Yeah, me neither ^_^
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2010 09:53 am Title: Chapter 5
*plays dramatic music*
The end of chapter six deserves that. Of course the way it ended made me picture Gibbs and Tony in a Western movie shoot out. Gibbs as the Sheriff, Tony as the bad guy and Tim as the "school ma'arm", um, school teacher. I look forward to seeing how Tim talks them into a threesome (should you decide to go that way) or seeing who Tim decides to be with.
Author's Response: Chapter six...omg, I didnt think I'd posted that one yet...lol...and there will be three chapters yet to come so..let me know which one you like best ^_^
Date: 08/04/2010 09:59 am Title: Chapter 4
cant wait for the next chapter:)
Author's Response: You got it ^_^ Sorry for the slow update ^_^
Date: 08/02/2010 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
ou la la I have a feeling I know what is coming up for Timmy - I hope anyways 8~D
Author's Response: Really? Do tell...no really do...tell me what you think is ahead for Tim...oh wait...that's what I'm supposed to do ^_^
Date: 08/02/2010 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh you know me, I can't read threesomes if you pay (and if you didn't you do now :D), but I just had to say how much I admire anyone who can use first person in their writing. Even if it turns out slight OOC, that's why we call it FANfiction! And you're doing a great job! Now can you kill Tony? LOL Joking!!
Author's Response: Kill DiNozzo? With love or kindness? LOL...either one might give the man a heartattack...hmmm...and thank you...I was ripped apart by a professor in one of my creative writing classes in college for writing in the first person but I've never quit doing so...glad you're liking it so far...
Date: 08/01/2010 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
very interesting. Thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response: Thanks have at least one more chapter to go on this one...thanks for reviewing ^_^
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2010 06:17 am Title: Chapter 3
OK, now that's evil. Sorry I didn't get back to you yesterday - work and Rules got in the way - but I think the reworking of the first two chapters works better. The language of the entries still seems a little not-Tony and not-Gibbs, but people often write differently than they speak, so there's some wiggle room there.
Author's Response:
Evil...me? ...okay I can accept that...and yeah I can see that the guys might seem waaaay out of canon, but like you said, wiggle room...now to see if they talk better than they write...lol
Thanks for reviewing and for the comments yesterday, they really did help swing the story around ^_^
Date: 07/30/2010 06:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Plz plz keep goin :)
Date: 07/30/2010 12:17 am Title: Chapter 2
Can't stop there. You'll have to have Tim tell why he puts up with Abby :-)
Love how he's on to both of them, hahaha.
~~Sue
Author's Response: He is a computer geek after all...^_^ Thanks for reviewing Sue
Date: 07/27/2010 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. Doesn't everyone love Timmy :-)
~~Sue
Author's Response:
Yup...I was going to have it be just one of them, but they both wanted to have their say...should have another chapter up soon Lori
Date: 07/27/2010 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Would be a good time for McGee to need to start fixing the computer systems and come across these journals. Say he has to do a simple search and puts in his name. Oh the possibilities.
Author's Response: hmm...thanks for the idea :)
Date: 07/27/2010 07:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it hope u can add more :)
Author's Response:
working on another chapter now :)