Date: 08/23/2012 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 12
I enjoyed this story. I'm impressed that you gave Tim a backbone and he stood up to Gibbs. That's something we never see from him too often, as Gibbs is so intimidating. Nice work!
I don't see Tim as standing up to Gibbs very often, less out of weakness and more out of respect for Gibbs' position. It has to be a good reason for him to talk back. I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 08/17/2011 12:12 am Title: Chapter 12
This is the first Stan Burley story I have read.
No. Wait. That's not right.
A Familiar Voice, An Unfamiliar Face also shows Agent Burley as a strong secondary character.
Thank you! It's the second Stan Burley story I've written. I really like Stan.
Thanks for reading!