Date: 10/19/2012 11:40 am Title: Agent Mac: Pixie the Cat Burglar
A very cute story, I enjoyed the family relationship between Chad and his parents, the story Tim told was great fun and I loved the reactions to Abby's DNA comments. Super little story!
You're the first to mention Abby's DNA thingie. ;D Had to put that in. I can just see Abby forget the fact that Chad's but a little kid.
I hoped you'd love this, Madeline.
Date: 08/23/2012 10:43 am Title: Agent Mac: Finding Nemo
Oh Lins that was just so hilarious, now I can fully read and review as mine is finished and it has been judged, it was just so funny.
Thanks you, Patsy. I thoroughly enjoyed writing it; the largest version even more. I couldn't send it 'through the shredder', so to speak, after stripping it down to suit the challenge.
Date: 08/20/2012 07:27 pm Title: Agent Mac: Finding Nemo
I liked the 2nd version best, because I too like a peek of future Tim, even if it is with goth girl. As long as she's treating Tim well, guess that's ok.
I think we all agree on liking the 2nd version best (in this case the 2nd chapter) which...incidentally...came first. When I learned that was not what the challenge was really about, I turned it into the shortened version (the first piece in this thread) to accommodate the requirements.
Date: 08/14/2012 11:46 am Title: Agent Mac: Finding Nemo
This was so good will there be more like this i do hope so
The first story was actually meant as a childrens' story, so I trust you refer to the second? The one with Tim reading to his son?
Actually, I like a little scene now and then of Tim and his (future) family. AU, but...I like that.